I've critiqued about a quarter of the things that need to be done, if you've submitted work, you're on the list. Just be patient, I have a paper to write for Psych, and I've got college scheduling to do. But I have received some notes, about Valentines life. I have a direction where I am going with this, and it's complicated to explain.

The game and everything about it belongs to Microsoft, I'm stating that now. It takes place in a game universe that was created by Microsoft.

If you don't understand the story, please go here, it will explain all the factions, systems, ships, and everything else. Okay?

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Keep sending work, but no more than four per person, alright?